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the completed version of Rizky Insani corporate identity.
some comments please..

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I like, I like.
:icongrafikdzine:
Not really down with the logo. There's too many elements in it like the tight letterspacing and the 3 icons next to it. It needs to be minimal somehow. Maybe one icon can be the logo? Businesscard #3 seems to work the best out of everything here. Maybe you can add that wave effect from your businesscard to your envelopes instead of the blocks.

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It seems to be a little too strong. If you went for a little less opacity on the envelopes, it would work better. Same for the letter head.

Good work though.

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:iconl0natic:
nice, very nice, very profesional :D (Big Grin)

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:iconchocmuffins:
I like too. Well, like some others, I would say that the total design is good (the logo is good for letterheads, and stuff), but the logo for a LOGO is too much. You should design something that is catchy, and easy to remember.

For example, DA logo, it's just a combination of d, and a. Not much, but easy to remember.

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:iconhikaridrops:
should fix some mistakes here..
actually what i wrote down as a LOGO , should be written as NEON BOX or SIGN BOX , whichever you prefer to call it :) (Smile)
but i'm too lazy to make changes, so that was it, left juz like that :D (Big Grin)
anyway, thanks for you who have take time to visit and giving comments on this piece.
really appreciated!! Love Love Love Love
:iconhikaridrops:
forgot to write, the logo itself is those three circles :D (Big Grin)
:iconpiano-ex:
hi!!! think want to say sumthin here
the overall desing and concept is very nice
really
but when I look at the LetterHead2
it's just feel unbalanced bettween
the top and bottom

and the envelope 2
the box kind in the bottom
it's really cathcing my eye
think it should be hanging or sumthing
not like this

but anyway
just some comments
nice works!!!

~piano_ex
:iconcberry240:
wow this is really bright.

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